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Stamp 1 Face-Breather

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Stamp 1 in a set of several stamps I'm working on. o:

Obligate Face-breather: Someone who relies on their mouth or nose for breathin, as opposed to torso or neck gills.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The gloss seems unnecessary. The boarder is way to small in comparison to the text. You might want to lessen the text size and up the boarder size. Also, the font seems really crude and the background doesn't fit well. What I mean is the colors don't really compliment each other. Warm color text on a cool colored background makes me think of an inverted photo. Another thing is the stamp itself seems a bit too large. But perhaps that is just because the text looks too big. Honestly, it isn't very appealing. It is an original concept though, and kind of funny. However, you could have executed it a bit better.